All Comments on 'Unchartered Territory/Family Trip'

I always like family being nude and being intimate with each other. I noticed you misspelled the word “cunt” twice. But anyway, your family story is exciting.

Call me old fashion, but is anyone think how selfish the guys are st climbing on top and fucking away? I mean damn, it least run a finger or tongue up and down the pussy lios a fee times. OK?

Amazing and so much potential for the future of continuances

Would love to see the illustrated version. Hopefully,once they get home they can introduce the neighbors and other fam members into the game. Hot!

d/d? can NOT go there.

Part 2 defiantly needed

About what happens when the family arrive home....................

I'm moving to another author..

Are these stories posted the same day they are written? spell check isn't nearly enough. You are badly in need of an editor.

"Dad must have done a good job because the boat started drinking and they abandoned her"

cunt and count aren't the same either as are many, many other words.

seeya.

what..wait - "drink pee to keep some fluids"

no no no - no real survivalist / prepper would EVER do that.

that is so wrong in so many levels.