All Comments on 'Uncle'

Sentence structure. This, like your other stories, is maddening to read because you have no idea how to form a sentence. It's just a long, badly written stream of consciousness, like a fire hydrant to the face.

Crappy copy of the other 3rd person story you submitted.

It wasn't as bad as someone else thought. Just not sure why you changed so little between you Uncle Curtis story and your Cousin Curtis story. You could have explored the age difference between the Cousin and the Uncle to make each story unique. Instead, it was like reading the same story twice. (Although there were some differences.)

i liked it , it was an okay story.

I loved it. I particularly found amusing the fact you used the same script in at least two of your stories I'm very much in favour of recycling, and reusing where possible it cuts down a lot of wasted energy in all respects. I'm looking forward to reading more of your economic use of the english language in the near future.