All Comments on 'Uncle Henry & My Incredible Life'

by MattblackUK

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PowersworderPowersworderover 4 years ago

Why didn't he have Mary charged with bigamy?

It was alright, but way too much extraneous detail about his background that didn't really add anything Important. His relationship with Mary was basically glossed over, so her infidelity and the aftermath didn't make much impact.

stev2244stev2244over 4 years ago
Nice, Matt

I could really feel the places and the era. Entertaining and interesting.

HarddaysknightHarddaysknightover 4 years ago
I always enjoy a Matt Black story.

Refreshing and interesting as hell. Good job on the romance.

SpencerfictionSpencerfictionover 4 years ago
Entertaining

An incredible story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Not bad

But really a lot of detail and not enough story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Few facts a bit dodgy time wise

And did the CAT’s really do business studies back in the early sixties?

Otherwise though a great story, much of which I could relate to.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
loss of two stars

he marries a lesbian but they never have sex with a side chick? In the swining 60s?

blackrandl1958blackrandl1958over 4 years ago
Sweet story, Matt.

I know how much you put into this. Well done. Five stars from me. Randi.

andyinozandyinozover 4 years ago
Fascinating

Thanks Matt. I was wondering, for a while, when the LW would make her entrance...but she made it eventually. Absorbing story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
The detail

made the story something out of the ordinary. Very well done. 5

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Wow

These stories from the cream of the LW authors are a blast. Hopefully, a few of the new one page cuck writers can read these and get some insight and inspiration to post real stories. MattBlack has written another great story. I don't know much about the Welsh, and enjoyed a little education. The cheating was handled in an interesting way. I did not see that coming, although I figured Sandie would be involved somehow. Worked well for Paul and June to just forget they existed, and have a happy life. Another great story with a happy ending.

MattblackUKMattblackUKover 4 years agoAuthor
Business studies degrees were a thing at the CATs, even as early as the 1950s

http://technicaleducationmatters.org/2009/08/24/chapter-13-developments-in-the-960s-and-the1970s/

Could he have done a combined degree in Business studies and English? Probably. Had he been there when the college became Aston University, my Uncle would possibly have taught him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great Story

This was a well-spun story, even if it did reflect on some of the strange Welsh roust abouts.

Carry on McDuff!

T.T.

MattblackUKMattblackUKover 4 years agoAuthor
Anonymous re sex with two women

Sex with a cheater? Really? Besides which, he was a Brummie (I.E., a man from Birmingham) and we weren't as liberated as that back in them days!

norafaresnorafaresover 4 years ago
Five Stars

A very entertaining read! Nice job, my friend!

moblanemoblaneover 4 years ago
any road up

Loved the story. As a lad from the Brummy area I enjoyed the vernacular which I had almost forgotten! The resevoir stirred a memory from my teen years of The Tower Ballroom. Prestatyn was a place I visited several times on trips to Rhyl.The references to the wartime bombing reminded me of a story I was told by my mother wherein she was on a train coming home from work when a bombing raid began and the train "hid" in a tunnel for some time in the dark until the "all clear" was sounded. Great Job, Thank You 5*****

schulz777schulz777over 4 years ago
all in all

quite a strange story

3starrs

SomeOneTwoThreeSomeOneTwoThreeover 4 years ago
That was fun.

I don't know Birmingham or San Francisco

so that historic part is lost on me.

But I did enjoy the story.

Didn't Birmingham have a pretty decent

football club a while back?

Anyway, thanks Matt for an enjoyable story.

4 out of 5 from me.

PostScriptorPostScriptorover 4 years ago
Well done!

A lot of fun. Love stories with more than a bit of tongue-in-cheek.

Well written, and a worthwhile read.

kenandram2kenandram2over 4 years ago
Just one thing

Just one thing I'd do differently, I would gave named the son, Henry. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
if she was a true lesbian

Wouldnt the idea of a man disgust her sexually? I am a straight male and the thought of sexual acts with another man disgusts me, I dont see how it would be any different for a gay person in regards to someone of the opposite gender

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Missed opportunity

When your story started, I thought you had a great premise. However, by the end, it sort of petered out to nothing. Damn shame.

Jack99Jack99almost 3 years ago

Loved it. Ignore the haters. I've seem many a professed lesbian switch sides back and forth. People change all the time.

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