by BobbyBrandt
Quite frankly, rather boring. The first two chapters had an arc to them, some character development. This was just non-stop, very predictable wall-to-wall sex.
I prefer more meat than gravy.
Interesting change for you but not nearly as engaging as your high intrigue/high achiever people stories (Heavy Traffic, His Daddy's Car, et al).
Why'd you need fuck up an otherwise good story by bringing the concept of babies into it?
Oooooooo..... You left the door open for three pregnancies!!!!!!!
I'd LOVE to read that series!!!!!!!!!
there needs to be a continuation of the story series. lots of scope for some really hot wild chapters. Please look to developing the story threads. Thanks
This story is defenitly not your style. To little "lit", to much "erotica." It´s a cheap story!!! I liked your earlier stories about the Brandt family.