All Comments on 'Uncle Sugar Daddy: Eloise'

by BobbyBrandt

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Rapierwit24601Rapierwit24601over 1 year ago

Quite frankly, rather boring. The first two chapters had an arc to them, some character development. This was just non-stop, very predictable wall-to-wall sex.

I prefer more meat than gravy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

i hope you find the time to work more on this story.

fitter44fitter44over 1 year ago

I liked it very much!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting change for you but not nearly as engaging as your high intrigue/high achiever people stories (Heavy Traffic, His Daddy's Car, et al).

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This series definitely needs to continue!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Keep going!!! We all need more chapters.

ToughSailorToughSailor8 months ago

Why'd you need fuck up an otherwise good story by bringing the concept of babies into it?

bhojobhojo7 months ago

Reminds me of the song " I'm me own grandpa"

NawtyMeNawtyMe3 months ago

Oooooooo..... You left the door open for three pregnancies!!!!!!!

I'd LOVE to read that series!!!!!!!!!

rocketfunrocketfun3 months ago

there needs to be a continuation of the story series. lots of scope for some really hot wild chapters. Please look to developing the story threads. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This story is defenitly not your style. To little "lit", to much "erotica." It´s a cheap story!!! I liked your earlier stories about the Brandt family.

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I have ventured off into some new literary territories lately, such as publishing my first middle-grade adventure story, which you will not see published on Literotica. I also have a dystopian adventure romance in the works, but since I don't post any part of a story until i...

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