by BobbyBrandt
Interesting, very interesting! Nicely set up, hope you decide to let it grow. Be well.../A
Typical Bobby Brandt story. Intriguing, fast moving and loaded with potential turns. Look forward to the continuation. Hopefully soon and long
Honestly, meh… Not into incest stories but this isn’t incest. People who are into it will be disappointed that it isn’t. Otherwise, the entire premise is ridiculous - they can’t accept his money unless they are his whores. What great morals Luna and Eloise have that they won’t accept free money but will whore themselves out for it… Have none of these idiots considered borrowing the money from him? Write up a contract and take out a loan? And what a “great” uncle that he instantly jumps on it..
I like it. Experienced and inexperienced plus the money to do anything and be helpful at the same time. I love the conversations and the thought processes they share rather than simply activity descriptions. And who doesn’t live a good Sugar Daddy. Keep on!
OH, I was just getting completely worked up over this story and you ended it. You need more to this story. And not 5 years from now.
Just a heads-up:
It took five days from when I submitted this story until it was published.
"Uncle Sugar Daddy: Terra" was submitted this morning, so you all can do the math on when you can expect to see it published.
so unusual but very erotic. My dad molested me when I was 14 but I didn't act out, I pretended to be asleep. For years I imagined fucking him and then masturbated. It caused me to offer my body in sex to get the man's love that I dated, but it never gave me love but plenty of lust.
Mrfriendly8181:
I appreciate your comment on my story but disagree with your assertion that it isn't incest.
By definition and legally, incest can be through bloodline or marriage.
Great premise for a story, and this was very well written.
Personally, I think this is the perfect category for this story. They're his sister-in-law and nieces, which makes their relationship distinctly taboo. If he ever goes to bed with any of them together, then that's definitely incest. Last and best of all, they aren't biological related to Drey, so he can knock them all up later, and their kids won't have two heads.
Transitions needs a little work. Got lost with Eloise from seen outside hus house ti the cell call years later? Great story all in al, 4*
Its a good story, even if it’s too vanilla for me at the end. But ok.
If there is a incest by marriage in the U.S., it is one of a lot of stupid laws in that country. You know MotoGP-Star Miguel Oliveira? He married his stepsister and the world is still existing. If you would let something happen, perhaps it’s a good idea to let them move to an other really free country.
What a perfect story!!!!!!!
Beautifully written and edited story!!!!!
Can't wait to read Terra's and Eloise's stores!!!!!!