All Comments on 'Uncle's Sweet Wife'

The stilted language makes this very difficult to read, please consider getting an editor.

2/5

Then I read the authors name .... wasn't hard to ignore it.

Or, better yet, just quit writing this shit. We have better stories to read............

I enjoyed reading this tale but feel that it can be expanded on much much more and maybe even have the uncle getting his true comupance in someway

Maybe have the land deal go through but in your financial favour etc

I read that others have found the writing and language used to be stunted and difficult to follow and while I agree for the most part I can understand that the places mentioned in the tale are all in and around Kenya

So not having the full grasp of the English language is to be understood if the writer is normally speaking daily in maasai or some other local to that area

Personally I say well done I could understand and follow the story and only wish there was more 👍

No. That style is so bad. Sorry.