All Comments on 'Unconquered Pt. 03'

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DragonCoboltDragonCoboltover 4 years agoAuthor

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Comentarista82Comentarista82over 4 years ago
Really odd and really funny

set of interactions you have between Chirp, June and the Goat. I don't know where you get them all, but most of them are rude to hilarious. This story certainly keeps me guessing, and the imagination behind it is unparalleled.

Now, I could care less for the ambiguity and I skip over the Ember/Chip lovemaking, but that aside, it's very head-scratching to figure out how this seemingly hapless halfwit hasn't gotten himself killed already. I'm sure that's what keeps me coming back.

MankeyMankeyover 4 years ago
Zeno Demons...

... employing the old Xeno's Paradox? Very clever. Great writing and story telling, can't wait to see where the rest of the story will lead

DragonCoboltDragonCoboltover 4 years agoAuthor

Thanks Mankey and Comentarista!

I hope you keep enjoying it!

Comentarista82Comentarista82over 4 years ago
Does the

IA! IA! have a special meaning? One possibility is "I agree" and the other is InshAllah for "God willing."

DragonCoboltDragonCoboltover 4 years agoAuthor

It's a reference to Kill Six Billion Demons - but it's generally a prayerful shout to praise your chosen godbeing, I believe.

Comentarista82Comentarista82over 4 years ago
Thanks

for the feedback, DragonCobolt! It certainly fits with the story, and I look forward to the next installment (especially with "Goat" and "Xora").

zorb1970zorb1970almost 3 years ago

good interesting start.

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