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I like this. I'm hoping it mostly stays like this. Plenty of danger and challenges sure, but with the world so full of possibilities and magic, why not have the main character stay kind of... goofy?

However it goes, I love your stories, and look forward to more. Thanks again.

funny and imaginative to miss. Love June slapping him upside the back of the head! I sure love the idea of Xora and what she adds to this. I just adore all this snark and wit! :)

Interesting he will have some more smarts on the way. I'm very interested to see how this fight goes.

I'm really enjoying this completely new world and universe you have created.

This is really great stuff, the comedy is very well balanced and you have such fascinating ideas for the lunar wives, please keep this going as I want to see what happens next!

Thanks, everyone!

Yes...completely new universe and world...*covers up Exalted with a blanket* There...no one will know...

and so unlike anything else I have read so far on this site. Do please keep this going, the humour you have managed to capture is delightful, and I am loving waiting to see where you take these characters next. Must admit though, still confused about Chirp the Saris. Do they get the option at some later point to leave their androgynous state and claim a specific gender for themselves?

So at first this lightly had my interest but then you added in the best Damn thing ever, SEXY ASS MUSCLE GIRL!!! And she's even a street shark so it's even better!!!

Keep up the character development, comedy, and fantasy worldbuilding so glorious the sun couldn't outshine it.