All Comments on 'Undefeated'

So twisted I had trouble keeping up with her logic, but so hot Iwouldgive you six stars if I could.

Why tf did you end it?

Strange how Hannah changed into Sara at one point.

Really really love this story. Just wish it had some good old-fashioned penis-in-vagina.

Doesn't make any sense to me at all.

Was pointless to read....."Madison would have me do this. Madison would have me do that" fucking garbage. Not other that but making the brother be so fucking dumb and thick headed was such a waste of time. Didn't bother even fully reading it

To anon that didn't understand Madison, it's just an outside motivator.

I really loved this story, we really don't know who started the game, but they're obviously both being controlled, and no one knows who started it.