by AlinaX
I read this, then I read your bio.
Either this wasn't a story you enjoyed typing, or you really don't know what a plot is or characters are.
I don't plan on reading anything else you've typed and submitted here unless someone gives me some reason to think this isn't representative of what you normally submit.
Is it over top and unrealistic? Sorry, yes, and probably it should have gone into Humor & Satire. I was just thinking of all those stories where an 18-yr-old boy gets a massive penis that his mother can't resist.
You may safely disregard anything and everything cageysea posts. They are the river troll of Incest/Taboo: I have yet to read a single comment that isn't a holier-than-thou smear against anyone that hasn't served up Chaucer. I don't know how their axe-grind against the community started, but it's testament to abysmal moderation that such obvious provocateurs aren't disciplined.
I hope there’s a sequel to this! This was sooo good! It could include the twins from the trial! And maybe the newly transformed daughter/sister could use her new dominant personality to find out about them? So many possibilities for a sequel, I really hope you consider it!
As an added comment I'd like to say that I agree whole heartedly with SirDigbyChickenCaesar.
Yeah, you can delete those comments if I were you. I actually like a longer story but there's something to be said for a quick and concise one as well.
Thank you for the supportive comments. They're much appreciated.
Honestly, I don't disagree with Mr Sea. This story was very focussed on being short and hot, and I know I/T dwellers generally prefer to see a loving relationship explored over multiple chapters.
Anyway, I've just rewritten the final scene but from the sister's perspective, and it's fun. I'll see where that goes...
I like most of your work. This one just didn't resonate with me at all. Too much science fiction, I guess. Maybe another time.
It's clever, funny, hot, and completely original. I hope we see more of her!
Liked it. I think it is in the correct category. I enjoy futa stories where their vaginas actually get used, which is seldom the case in most futa stories. Would have been a 5 if the sister's husband had fucked the futa...
This is the first Futa story I've ever read on here. It was quite interesting. Fun, definitely. Over the top...yeah a bit lol but I enjoyed reading it and will look to read more of your work
As futa stories go, this one is nowhere near the top, let alone over it, lol.
This is nothing but fast-paced erotic fun. I love the bits with her parents, but I absolutely adore the part with her sister. Every sibling with a cock has wondered what it would be like to bury it in their sister's warm loving cunt. Too bad the sister was already pregnant. Otherwise she could have gone back to her husband with an incest baby growing in her, and let him believe it was his!