All Comments on 'Under A Rest Pt. 02'

Your writing is so good! Doctor Angelos is deliciously seductive and I love how her methods of hypnosis pull Detective Berman deeper and deeper despite his efforts to resist. I'm excited to read more.

What a beautiful tale of seduction. Now onto part 3.

Wow, it's going so awesome ♥️❤️. I can see the hints screeching that both Dr Angelos and detective started to feel that the person in front of them is special for them . Just hope it ends up nicely for both of them

For a person like me , having English as not it's primary language, this story just requires at least a dictionary with him . Hey bro , can you use those strange words less often . Or I might top my English exams by just reading this story 😒😒. Just kidding 😄 , write as you want to just focus on the story and then just think a little bit about what I requested 😅