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by notbreckenridge

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

There's part of the story missing - how they got to his house after they were at the brewery.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

There's a lot that's missing in this story. You either make it up on your own, or be confused, I guess.

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77about 2 years ago

Not perfect, but despite the brewery-house magic transition it was beautifully written. Loved the characters, I wish the story would have been longer. A solid 5.

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