All Comments on 'Under Her Spell'

Absolutely brilliantly written.

I'm not quite sure about the category of this story. It seems to me that it's borderline 'Non-consent'. However, the tale as a whole is wonderfully sinister and very well written. So it's five stars from me.

Well done and very erotic. 5 stars

That was so much fun!

Very powerful visions brought by the author’s graphic descriptions.

A little disturbed by the ‘forced’ submissions otherwise known as brainwashing an unknowing innocent.

Author has excellent writing skills

👍🥇

Wow... you slayed it!

I liked the story five stars from me

Please add more...this story was amazing ...lovely slow build and erotic story. Honestly one of the best I’ve read in ages. Please consider another chapter.

Worked me over like a warm oily massage. Lovely pace and detail with a novel plot. A second installment would be great, libby x

I have been curious about hypnosis for quite some time, but have not experienced it ~ yet! I loved the build of the story and the increasing sexual tension. I longed to experience it myself. Your writing brought me there. The build of sexual tension and its subsequent release was a delight!

Yes, I believe I must submit myself to a female hypnotist and, hopefully, share a similar experience!

Thank you!

Would love to have the story continue. Nicely written and sexy as hell

Absolutely loved it except for the opening. Too confusing on the click...is she snapping her fingers?

Clever, fascinating, very well handled. And very atmospheric and erotic too.

I love your stories in general but this is so freaking hot. I don’t normally love mind control/hypnosis but it’s done so well here. Please please please, I would absolutely love to see more of these two!

Great story. I'd love to see more

Wonderful. Loved the use of the trigger outside of trance as a way to tease and control. Would love a second part.