All Comments on 'Under Her Thumb Ch. 03'

Waiting for next chapter, hope it's soon. Thanks

I eagerly await the next chapter. Another fine job of story telling.

Continue on....... All of the chapters so far have been well thought out, presented, and written.

All my thanks for keeping this story going. Please keep it going and please get the next part out soon.

You are doing a great job! Please keep writing! I can't wait until the next chapter(s) come out!

Love this story. He's got the best of both worlds, raunchy and angelic. Can't wait to see where this leads. Fantasy to be in this situation.

I loved the way the story unfolded. Not sure it could have been any hotter.. Can't wait for the next chapter!! Great job :-)

For the love of God, get an editor.

Overall, I love this story. But, the dialog on obedience was a stretch for me. It was as if he was addressing 12 year olds. While both Bea and Gin are obviously submissive to one or another degree, neither is retarded. They are both smart young women, not slow witted little girls. His professed love for them demands that he respect them as they do him. Talking down to them just doesn't cut it.

Otherwise, Great story! It could and hopefully will continue for many chapters.

YOU MAY PROCEED!!!!! Like that bro. With authority. And encouragement.😜

Dom, you're still killing it. Seriously though. Proceed.