by AmazonDarkRider
Please tell me more of this story i want to be under madams bottom
Glad you're enjoying it so far! (I'm not sure that Stephen is!)
Hello. I'm sorry you're not enjoying it. Is there a particular reason? I'm genuinely interested as it's always nice to entertain and engage with readers. Criticism can often be useful . Thank you.
I'm very interested in what will happen next, please continue! Also, don't listen to the other anon who didn't offer any constructive criticism.
Thank you for that. I appreciate it - and will try not to keep you waiting for too long!
Very erotic and well written. Look forward to reading more
.....or so it seems. It's way too early to say how much, because obviously, Part 03 is on it's way. (Hopefully) I was intrigued at how the high expectation of submission and worship of her little hole is so highly pronounced. You're not moving too fast, which is good. I want to say you're moving too slowly, but that's only the anticipation in me talking. Take your time. Make it count. My owner loves it when I worship her "royal rectum" as she calls it. I won't go into detail about that. This is YOUR story, not mine, and very good one so far.
I kinda liked it, but you didn't write any more :-(. Was looking forward to her getting your tongue in her hirsute cunt, and you fucking her in front of her husband. She sounds like the kind of lady who would revel in getting you almost to the vinegar strokes, making you pull out then ordering her husband to lick her to orgasm. There, that's my wanktasy for today, thanks.