All Comments on 'Under Mommy's Control: Denied'

God but i love this story.

I love this. You write so well. Tantalising, confusing, tempting, restrained, oblique and so so sensual. I had to read twice and concentrate. Anticipation is so much better and the intensity of the fetish is all in the mind. Thank you. xx

Makes me want to eat that boipussi

My suspense was on edge with that excellent part. I hope mother takes the advice and encases him in a gimp suit that he cant take off because of the hypno. That would really build the dread thank you Mommy keep the excitement coming X.

Amazing as always hopefully the next one comes out soon =)

Ahhh!!! So good!!!!!! Keep it up please!

Great job! I can see you really are improving. Can't wait for Jamie to takes it up the ass from her mom strap-on!

I know I'm late but I have three things to say!

1. You're an amazing writer and if you published a book I would buy it.

2. I think I speak for most of us when I say I love this story and eagerly await every new chapter!

3. A small suggestion. Maybe make Jaime more obsessed with pleasing his mother to the point of no return? Develop a full Oedipus complex?

Soooooooo goooooood love when mommy tasted his ass juices off of her fingers

Please keep writing!

I love where this is going. I want her to do more, slowly building up until she's fucking Jamie's asshole. Like a mommy should. Perhaps have him fuck her with a strap on?

Has to be your best work to date.

Wanna be Jaime

This is just so freaking awesome… been on the edge for hours reading the whole series and just cant get enough. Hope you have it in you to right this series to completion

i just read the entire story in one sitting, one of the best ones i have read so far

read the whole story so far in one sitting and I can't get enough, excited to see more

Great story so far. Mommy has already shown she's willing to make money off of him with chat donations. Maybe she can eventually arrange for him to have sex with some of the top donors, ramping up his submission and functionally turning him into a prostitute.

Love this series, glad you're back at it!

Still excited for more

Wonderful, you keep me coming back!

Jamie and his mom are amazing characters, she is loving but manipulative and he is soft and open to suggestion.

I genuinely care about the two of them and can't wait5 to see what happens next. Keep up the great work.

When are you writing the next part

Develop more with ear piercing ,wearing earings bangles nail polish, blunt femme Bob haircut. Public humiliation. Full female outings. Then finally fuck mom and become cuckold. Can go far.

Jamie needs to start wearing makeup. At least something he can hide, like painting his toenails. Not to mention, wearing stockings/pantyhose underneath his pants would be amazing.

He obviously needs introducing to anal sex and wearing what men like sissies to wear on a permanent basis. Perhaps his mother could find a very assertive man amongst her subscribers who would pretend to be he new boyfriend but actually fully use Jaime as the girly faggot he's turned into. From there it should be simple for Jaime to become a prostitute with her mother as the madam taking the money.

love the chapter and jamies development so far but one thing just didnt sit right with me really about this chapter. the one part where the captions said he was just garbage to her and caused him to sob lightly seemed a little too cruel since his mother seems to be the only person in his life that he can look to. i get thats the point really to break him down to nothing but idk it just seems like one of the more negative ways of doing so. it was just those two lines that stuck out poorly tho so nonetheless keep up the great work and i look forward to the next chapter!

A Thanksgiving celebration might be in order to bring him out to his Mommy officially, the the Christmas gift of some breasts and a big beginning for the “New” year.

Love this series! Can't wait for the next installment.

At this point he needs either a gloryhole or a recliner with a hidden fuck machine and wirelessly controlled restraint system because this is getting very spicy.

My goddess its been so long please post another chapter hopefully one where she gimps him up.

I agree with the other comment about calling him garbage in his mother's eyes!!!! That's the only part of this story I truly disliked!!!!! She is the only person he has!!!! Even a sissy needs loving care!!!!! Don't let her be truly evil and cruel to her son whom she supposedly loves!!!!

It's a wonderful series, really! And no, i definitely can't agree that sissy is garbage in her mother's eyes! Right the opposite since She obvously not just loves to sissify her but also to play with her ... and well, i in fact always loved it when my Mommy used to tease me in such a "wicked" way...! For me it simply proved that i was Her little sweet darling ... and i can see that Jamie is Sandras darling as well...!

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