All Comments on 'Under My Umbrella Pt. 01'

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Great story, I'm completely mesmerized by this story and can't wait for the next part.

Looking forward to seeing chapter 2 unfold.

Such a good story! I like the realism of them getting to know each other and having their spat when trying to figure out where the other was coming from. Not everyone just jumps right into bed, especially if they have been hurt in relationships in the past. Lastly his comment about BMWW pairing being everywhere, why can't BWWM is so true!!

Great start! Looking forward to part two

This story "WOW"

I think I'm in love with Alli.

I wish I was the fly on the wall

Please continue this story

I agree with the previous comments, excellent story and it should be in romance category as color has little to do with it

I love hoe you are taking your time with fleshing out the characters and with them having sex. Keep up your amazing work.

You have a romantic touch. Keep it up.

Over the past decade I have become more and more aware of the beauty of the African American woman. There are many types of physical beauty, a multitude of variations. Then, too, there seems to be a more down-to-earth attitude toward life. I hope more men will see or are already discovering this.

R.

The only suggestion and its not really a big one... i would keep all the chapters together in romance. Some people only check out certain categories until they find someone they enjoy (like me) i saw your new story by looking at your story list. I never visit interracial love because it's so often white women getting impaled by telephone poles, black women being treated like bed wenches (i loath that shit). Sure there may be a few other races tossed in but its generally just fucking. Often the blatent racism isn't even masked.

Sure the category is interracial love so it fits.. i just think you might pick up more readers if you grouped the stories under a single cat

Great story!

I love the sweetness of this story and the slow build-up. The run-on sentences still throw me off a bit and I sometimes forget to mentally place a period so I can slow down reading. Other than that, I love the story.

Since you mentioned Michigan Avenue, I’m guessing this is set in Chicago. If it’s Chicago, I have to ask, was the pizza real Chicago deep-dish? Authenticity, bro!!! :-D

5 stars, by the way.

Although there is no sex in the story, I gave it five stars. I love the romance and the buildup. Well written, very well written.

Love the line about the pump resovior.

Love your style - love the story. Thanks for writing. Thanks for sharing

When she called him a sissy for working at a place called Bloomers, I thought it was a lingerie shop. I don’t see why a guy working with plants would be considered a sissy.