All Comments on 'Under Pressure Ch. 04'

Definitely need more of this!

I am presently working on Book Two of it! Just a lot going on with other projects (will be dropping the news soon on where THAT is leading, especially with In The Mirror), but as soon as it gets a bit ahead I'll start putting it up.

Enjoyed this looking forward to more!

I loved these first four stories and am happy to see you are continuing. It is refreshing to see a transformation story that is upbeat, consensual, and loving. Well done!

Going strong still. My only reservation is the category as I think it's now moved into something like scifi's or possibly mind control. Sometimes using novels and novellas is a way round classification issues. Will Jay's transformation continue?

OK, so fair enough after my comment on the previous chapter, Jay did get some sort of upgrade. Would've been fun if he got the mental upgrades too. But still. Let's see what book 2 brings us.