All Comments on 'Under Pressure Ch. 12'

A really enjoyable series. Thank you for sharing it. Feels like it could be just the beginning though. Is it significant that only Lucy had an external focus for activating her last pressure point?

Glad you enjoyed it!

There is an Epilogue coming next week, but to answer your question there is a reason she was physically there for the other two. The same focus was used.

This series cries out for continuance! There are so many possibilities for plot lines that it would be a shame to just snuff them out. While I would not like you to neglect your Quaranteam series development (please keep it as the top priority), I would love to see this story continue.

"One came to my office asking about some kind of path of power yesterday,"

It was the day before yesterday. Discussed with girls after, flight plan started, pressures point 1 done that night. Yesterday was desk oral, student tests, and up to 50% process last night.

"Even we we didn't see people transforming,"

Something wrong there.

"The long I stayed, the more likely I was to be found"

Longer

Lilly had a smirk on her fence as she asked...

A fence is a strange place to have a smirk. 😅

Thank you, @alsith! Both have been fixed in my internal docs, if I ever get around to submitting fixes they will be a part of it.

Great series, enjoyed it.