by SimonWatts
GOOD story - 5/5 for certain.
Showing what's happening, and how the societies work together, is far better than telling the reader.
Really original. Well written. Can’t wait for more, this could be an epic telling!
Wow great start. Got very interesting real quick, and love the action. Can't wait for more.
Caution: this new Lit format is very bad about connecting following chapters. Five stars.
Wait, this is awesome! What a setting, good characters, and even a headiness to the we scene. I love it, and I want more.