All Comments on 'Under the Faraday Blanket - Ep. 01'

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SimsasiSimsasiabout 2 years ago

Great one, looking forward to your next story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

GOOD story - 5/5 for certain.

Showing what's happening, and how the societies work together, is far better than telling the reader.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Really original. Well written. Can’t wait for more, this could be an epic telling!

Crusader235Crusader235about 2 years ago

Wow great start. Got very interesting real quick, and love the action. Can't wait for more.

Caution: this new Lit format is very bad about connecting following chapters. Five stars.

abiostudent3abiostudent3over 1 year ago

Wait, this is awesome! What a setting, good characters, and even a headiness to the we scene. I love it, and I want more.

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