All Comments on 'Under the table'

That was a sexy story. Thanks for posting. Do you ever share photos? You sound sexy as hell.

John

Thanks for all the comments and proposals to improve! ❤️ I will try to apply in my next stories ✍🏻

To all the detractors I say, a couple things. Its fiction. Its also a first work. Let it go.

As for the story, I liked it. I had to reread a few lines and insert some mental punctuation adjust for some of the writing. Looking forward to your next work.

Not a native English speaker?

A dinner with friends will finish with a surprising end

Didnt read it but as this is the first story you write under this name...we can guess theres no surprise ending. We can also safely assume youre a dude out to impress odoreater and his trademarked "This is nearly word perfect" ridiculousness.

Bet the story sucked as all the other garbage youve posted. And what little I read at the start....NakedCraving?

Hot story. Victory goes to the brave. It takes real self confidence to walk into a woman's public restroom to attract and seduce a married woman. It is called balls. Good job at describing intense sexual arousal. 5 stars good job

I enjoyed it. It's just a story for entertainment.

I guess she cheated on her husband now!

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Okay story, but the punctuation was so poor that it became really distracting.

Fun story... ***** keep writing!

I enjoyed your story a lot because I once was fingered to orgasm by the host of a dinner party for eight. He was seated in the middle of the table, I was to his right, and his wife was on his left. The tablecloth had a lengthy overhand, so no one noticed, not even my husband who was next to me. I let him do it because we had flirted at work for months and I was wildly excited by it. I still wonder if his wife knew what was happening.

Hot story Bella thinking back to a few of the guys meeting a friend after work with his coworkers often . Everyone would get tipsy at happy hour , flirty and handsy. At some point over a three year period those two woman were gucked by most of our friends only one of which worked at the company. Blowjobs and fingering were a definite every time . It was a running joke how both of there husbands had tasted at least six other guys Cum and didn’t know it . One time both hubby and wife were wasted and heavily kissing in a booth. Her in a short skirt and leaning into him my friend was sliding one up her ass and two in her pussywhils she kissed her unsuspecting hubby . The other girl two years into this stopped because she was pregnant and wasn’t sure if it was her hubby’s or her boss who fucked her for a week straight on a business trip. Crazy but all friends who worked for big companies were always fucking the married coworkers . I myself realize as I got a little older and married how messed up it is and never have cheated on anyone and personally would not tolerate being cheated on but to each his own . Looking for future fun stories from uou

Thanks for your comments 😘😘📝🔥💪🏻

Good story but you need to work on your grammar. I enjoyed it though.

Good story with a nice level of eroticism. I guess English isn’t your first language, in which case, congratulations on your writing = it’s pretty good. An editor would correct the issues and help you improve.

Well done since English is not your first language !

Excellent story Love the under the table action. I tried send you a longer comment in the contact section but it won’t let the email through.

What a sexy wife. Hubby is a very lucky guy.

needs some editing,

Both great stories! Please write more!

Short and … dumb.

Even a smelly fart left more impression.

Try again or not.

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