All Comments on 'Undercover Mother'

The last line was so great! Only thing better would be if the story had been expanded. The trouble got resolved too quickly. Otherwise great.

Well written, entertaining story that was hot til!

I thoroughly enjoyed your story. I'm trying to learn character development for my own stories. Thank you for the lesson.

Really hot story. Kept me entertained from start to finish. Would have been nice if he came back for more every day till the arrest.

Keep up the good work.

…which kept me gripped all the way through.

I really enjoyed it. The plot put her in a position where she really had no choice the first time she did him, and she had to do him in public.

Very Hot story! Five Stars for it! Hope there's another chapter, maybe Charlie needs a sample of his mom too, seems his cock is just a little shorter but thicker than his friends.

It was hot. I expected Ronnie to see Karen in the club and blackmail her but you surprised me nicely.

The only thing I would change was Karen asking money to strip and fuck Ronnie. Kessler treats her like a whore and a whore has sex for money. She wants him to think she is innocent so asking 5 grands for sex like a top class prostitute is the way to go.

part 2 please add the son.

Good job of getting the mother into a situation where she had to do the son's friend and of making mom love it. Friend forcing himself on Mom a second time seemed a bit out-of-character, but more than made up for by the resulting very hot sex. Mother accepting friend as fuck-mate in final scene also well done. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

Very good. The mother’s situation was set up really well, and the tension of undercover and play acting was great. Not sure why she’s been a hermit since her husband left, but it’s good to see she’s found something fulfilling.

A Police Detective lets a piece-of-shit walk all over her and forces her to have sex? She would have been more than capable of physically putting him down, When he threatened to tell the gang boss she could have had him arrested and held in the cells until the bust. If her son found out what had happened, well, that's part of the price of her doing undercover work. If she can't hack it... get out.

This story is well written and comes close to the truth in many ways. My late wife worked undercover in the organized crime task force. She was frequently at risk of death or torture. She was forced to submit to sex including gangbangs to prove her loyalty on many occasions. While undercover, she contracted sexually transmitted infections several times and once when trapped for seven weeks on a mafia leader's yacht, and out of birth control pills, she sustained a tubal pregnancy and nearly died in the Bahamas where they had gone for money laundering.

Great story!!!

I really like this story. The part where Karen has no choice but to fuck Ronnie was a nice surprise. I loved it when Karen was forced to ride Ronnie sitting on the chairs and he had free access to her tits.

I second LenardSpencer's comment on this. Even for a stroke story, the plot, the main character and her actions are just too incoherent, illogical and plain stupid. It's really an insult toward a mature woman, a mother and a police officer. The first encounter at Kessler's- minus her inner monologue- o.k. From there on- meh!

Just think about it: Karen's first assessment of Ronnie: a petty criminal, whose actions are not excused by the circumstances of his upbringing and a not so good, barely tolerated influence on her son.

Then, meeting him at Kessler's, she had to know Ronnie took on a job there. Surprisingly in her thoughts now she labels him an innocent boy? Switching to think of him as a man because he's got a big cock- oh please! Only to learn later Ronnie is a blackmailer and rapist. She would eventually find out about his selling drugs to teens while being on Kessler's payroll. Her conclusions: protect him from the law and fuck him, literally.

This woman is a drop out as a mother, a cop, a citizen and as a human being capable of self pleasuring to not become as randy as a bitch in heat.

To those who have brutalized this little jerk-off story: Lighten up, huh? After you finished your dissection, what did you expect to find inside, "To Kill A Mockingbird?"

Achtung!

LITEROTICA HAS NOTHING WHATSOEVER TO DO WITH REAL LIFE!

If it did, nobody would be reading. They'd all be fucking their quadruple D mothers-in-law up the ass.

I liked the story!

What woman can turn down a thick long cock? Not me!❤️

I understand why some people are frustrated by this story. Yes, things weren't 100% realistic or logic. Still, this is a porn story, pure and simple. When a lady fucks the pizza guy, or the plumber, or some guy pretends to be a doctor to give women breast exams, usually the logic and realism is wonky, but no one cares, because it is porn.

If this were an intense HBO type of story, with tons sex and police work, then we might see some better logic.

Anyway, it was a good short porn story. It was not great literature, or a carefully crafted pulp noir police drama. Still, it amused me and I would probably read it again some time.

Maybe its just me, but when he first began to fuck her with the gang there watching Ronnie whispering to her "that he owned Charlies mom." He after all was not the upstanding person he seemed to become after he now held all of the cards.

Hot hot hot. Don't care if it's not 100% accurate on how the real world ticks, it made me wet that's for sure!

Undercover assignment, my butt! She wants to be considered a professional yet stoops to this? No, thank you!

OMG people. Lighten up. It's a story. A fairy tale. I liked the story. Very entertaining. He's 18 so she's not doing anything illegal.