by ChuckEPoo
Excellent chapter and series. Looking forward to explosive finish.
This was fast moving, sexy, dramatic and captured my attention throughout. Reads like a movie script. 5
Heading to the showdown at 500 MPH.........the wait for this was worth it, now need to wrap it up....and go 10-7
I really enjoyed this story. Hope you finish it as it sounds interesting as to what will happen at the party.
I thought this was going to be the conclusion. Of course, I know the shit is going to hit the fan and the plan will not go as expected. I'm ready for more surprises.
I must confess, this is the longest story I've ever read from beginning to end. The reason is the terrific plot, the logical flow, (even with all the twists), the great sex, and a great writing style.