All Comments on 'Undercovers Detective Ch. 08'

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Readyeddie2Readyeddie2over 6 years ago
Excellent

Excellent chapter and series. Looking forward to explosive finish.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Well written

This was fast moving, sexy, dramatic and captured my attention throughout. Reads like a movie script. 5

NormCastleNormCastleover 6 years ago
THANK YOU <3

Heading to the showdown at 500 MPH.........the wait for this was worth it, now need to wrap it up....and go 10-7

CignalCignalabout 6 years ago
Thank You

I really enjoyed this story. Hope you finish it as it sounds interesting as to what will happen at the party.

mitchawamitchawaabout 6 years ago
surprise

I thought this was going to be the conclusion. Of course, I know the shit is going to hit the fan and the plan will not go as expected. I'm ready for more surprises.

I must confess, this is the longest story I've ever read from beginning to end. The reason is the terrific plot, the logical flow, (even with all the twists), the great sex, and a great writing style.

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I am married, 50, living in the home I built at the beach in Southern California. I am early retired after selling my business. Being a fitness nut, you can usually find me either surfing, playing tennis or at the gym. This past year, I have started writing erotica. Not as po...

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