All Comments on 'Underground Baseball'

Awesome story but it would have been better if the perp faced some consequence.

☆☆☆☆☆

I liked how bout the sequel is uncle Marty and whoever paid for the movie locked underground until one of them end up pregnant. Make sure they are both male so they can suffer for eternity.

Wow. Great build up. Great naration. Whole scenario was 100% believable. Kind of reminds me how the military basically strips you down and remolds you. The situation they were in pretty much did that. Story didnt move too fast or slow...kept me reading, wanting more. F'd up what the uncle did but those two hit the jackpot in the end. 5 star story hands down!

Fantastic build up and great story line although I do remember reading a similar story. I hope the kids lock up the mom and uncle have fun with them inherit all the money and leave to their own island and start a family.

Another banger, thabk you!

Almost went with 4 stars cuz the totally fucked up uncle getting away with having family drugged and held hostage to make porn, but I still had to give it a 5. The story all the way up to there was awesome. It was definitely hot enough and had me cracking up laughing several times. When Wendy goes off with the fake sex talk...🤣

Good story. Reminds me of "Incest For Your Freedom" a bit.

This was amazing, Cig. The build up of their relationship was great. Thank you for writing this.

And the smoking lion delivers again! A masterpiece, hands down. I only saw two small mistakes, "putting adding", and a missing "each" in the last sentence, other than that it's fit for the printing presses, bound to be a bestseller. Five stars, of course!

Not a bad story! I want you to write a new porn story Brother and sister twins married and then a daughter is born and 18 years later a brother and sister fucks their daughter incest family can you write?

Great story. It could have used a bit more at the end but hey what do I know? I just read 'em I don't write 'em. 5

Cheers

SAGE

Very long, lots and lots of dialogue and a weird but somewhat happy ending. Well written and I enjoyed it. Thank you. Where were my uncles when my little sister and I needed them?

Excellent work as always.

and then they grabbed a piece of wood and bashed the evil pricks head in till he was dead and revealed all to their mother and the police, it was considered natural justice and they spent years in therapy!

Appropriate retribution is required for the ending of this tale. However, I was a fantastic story other than that. Well written. Truly one of a kind. 4.5/5

The baseball analogy was a stoke of genius.

Loved the story and the way you incorporated the baseball game