All Comments on 'Underneath Ch. 03 - FINAL CHAPTER'

Never thought I'd like a story with a guy wearing lingerie, but here I am giving 5 stars across chapters. I really loved that Jess came to terms with himself and didn't push Nick away.

Wow, just fantastic! One of the hottest stories that I've read here. I loved experiencing these two explore sexuality together. Definitely need a follow-up story!

this is so fucking cute😭😭😭

OMG was this good! It was ten times better than just good. This last chapter had everything in it. The awaking feelings, the jealousy, and one hell of a passionate lovemaking scene. You had me so hard reading this, I thought I would cum without even touching myself. This was a great story with a fantastic ending. Thanks, MLF

That was truly incredible. Thank you. Xxxx

This is an absolute pleasure in so many ways. The awakening aspect of the story, the evolution of self-awareness, the burning hot desire Jess has for Nick, the mutual desire and its culmination. Even better? Watching you, eraj, come into your own as a writer in such a short period of time! Congratulations on this amazing creation, sir. You nailed every aspect of the story. Such a satisfying, sexy read.

A lot of this story run close to my first-time in a toilet at work. Then being invited back to the guy's house a few day's later. These times changed me forever. As lingerie followed a little while later. Great storytelling let's hope this is the start💋💋

Thank you so much for having an actual love-making scene in your story. That alone in my mind makes it five stars. I enjoyed the the realization or awakening, although, like yourself, I'd always known. For me it wasn't so much finding out that I was gay, as much as it was coming to terms with it and knowing that that wasn't a bad thing. I've never been into forced feminization or humiliation. That being said, your story was strong enough that I still read it all the way through. Bravo

@BlowPopJ

I'm so grateful for your appreciation, especially, that it is not your cup of tea type of the story!

I hope I will write more 'to your liking' stories in the future :)

@Straycatndc

I didn't plan to do a follow-up story as Jess and Nick in my mind stay together as a couple :)

It would be just... home-life with them :) Probably too boring for LE :)

@MLF

The best compliments always are: "I almost came untouched", how can it be any better? :)

Thanks, MLF!

@Chloecrossed

Thank you so much!

@dnsontn

Your words mean so much to me as I'm still new on LE, and I'm not sure if I always fit here with my gay-love stories, I'm so grateful for your kind interest in my writing :)

@Lola6996

I'm glad that the story was similar to your memories! :) I hope the memories were nice! :)

@MsNatalie99

I appreciate your comment, as I'm privately also not into humiliation during sex situations, I prefer love-making sex with respect (the good fuck is also ok) :) Although... I have nothing against if the guy would wear some nice lingerie. ;) But I like to explore different ideas in my stories, as I just enjoy imagining creative plot lines. :)

I'm glad you liked my story :)

I am a gay woman but truly enjoyed this story. Thank you. I am glad to discover you on this site.

Loved this story as i love wearing lingerie and i got very very hard reading this

Hello again :)

Jess was both touching and so hot in this last chapter ! It's a very powerfull mix of virility, manliness, acceptance, full love, tenderness and devotion to his mate, that you wrote here ! Actually, Nick was also incredibly hot, even if we don't have his feelings as much. Both, together, were wonderful.

Hm, i may repeat myself but... i loved this story x). I liked how it started in a dom/sub (almost cute) relation, and then this part evolved in an occasionnal play. Has if it was a "tool" to protect themselves from their attraction at the beggining, to let them time to realise and accept things. Jess' deep upheaval has been very well described, without excessive drama, and it was great to know that Nick has been in the same state of mind the whole time. And the touches of humour are delightfull, I catch myself laughing more than once ;)

Thanks a lot for writing and charing this story with us !

@Mysterre

Hello again my friend :) I'm so honored you continue to read my stories, already probably more than a half, there really can't be a greater reward for an author, when readers keep coming back, as it means I do something right? I wholeheartedly thank you for appreciation of my stories, it means so much. I actually have a IV conclusion chapter for the Underneath series - already started! About 10 pages written so far! It will be called: "Underneath: And beyond." Jess and Nick will explore even more bold kinks :D

This was such a sweet, hot story! Love Nick and Jess!

Sensational!!!!

That was one of the best descriptions of first time lovemaking I've ever read. The genders don't matter: it's two people discovering their bodies as they're discovering each other. And the awkwardness of Jess' attitude toward kissing was perfectly expressed. I wrote a story about my first male kiss, but it pales in comparison to this one. Thank you for showing me another side of romance.

Been a quiet reader for some time and I really enjoy your stories. Can’t wait to see how this unfolds

@ggone

Well I started new part but it went more into crossdressing fetish and I hesitate if I should publish it. It may not be to gay people liking. 🫣

Oh my goodness... What a story. I absolutely love it. Thank you so much for sharing. I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.... Please continue this story.

@jtownman, I'm happy you liked it, to be honest, I have a part of this story followup written, maybe I will publish it one day :D

There must be a follow up to this sequel, pls post the next part,loving it

@anon, thank you, I think about it :D

I totally loved this story. I loved the sexy panty boy Nicholas even wearing corduroy jeans when he has his first intimate exchange with Jess. I love how Jess keeps fighting his gay desire for Nick only to slowly realize he is gay. I love the tension between them as they individually figure out their true desires. And then ending is perfect!!

@Anon

Awww such a nice comment, thank you so much! I'm happy you liked it :D

I totally loved this story!

@anon, thanks! :D

I wish you would write another chapter to this beautiful love story. You are an excellent writer. I love the way you flesh out the characters with intimate details. I also love the struggle between their desires and their understanding of societal norms. It is a very addictive and captivatingly romantic love stary. And, yes, I would love to read another chapter!

I love this series SO MUCH!!! So hot, so delicious, so sweet.

I loved this story - all of the chapters. I would love to read the additional chapter that you tease - "And we also talked. But that is a whole other story..." - at the end. I hope you consider writing it. You are an excellent author.

@Anonymous

Thank you! I have written about 40% of the next chapter, but kinda lost my momentum :/

@SummerSammy

Thank you for all your comments ;)

@Anonymous

Thank you so much for all your kind words, it means a lot!