All Comments on 'Understall, My First Time'

by Adelguy001

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story, I wish there was just a little more. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The fact that it's real makes it really hot. Tearooms were the best. Too bad they're mostly gone now. Love the idea of you getting your first taste of dick in one of them.

Stacys_Hair_GelStacys_Hair_Gelover 2 years ago

Good effort. Think about adding more detail, the cock and the way it moves or feels in your hand. His responses physically and verbally. How your body reacts. Did you stroke it, were you leaking. Often the build up descriptions can make the sex super hot.

Good luck

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