All Comments on 'Understanding Pleasure'

by Prurientplayer

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1D9O5M91D9O5M9over 2 years ago

This is fun story, not what I expected.

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
Nice fantasy

Will you continue the story?

DocWordsDocWordsover 2 years ago

I enjoyed your story. Needs a little editing, but overall, it was good. Thanks for posting it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This story was fun....and while not overly sexual, it was a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Creative and fun!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

imaginative

OldUncleAlOldUncleAlover 2 years ago

Short and to the point. An enjoyable read. Its amazing how need will get someone down off their high horse. Instead of belittling her bro, now she appreciates him. Little changed, other than she saw what had been there all along.

Glad he’s happy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Fun. Great, just the way it was.

Frankie1952Frankie1952over 2 years ago

Love your story and eager to read more of what this "couple" get up to. Maybe move out and start making babies.

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