All Comments on 'Understanding Women'

5 stars. A very nice story. Great characters and build up. What a lucky guy to have 2 to choose from. Thanks for your time and imagination.

I didn't see that coming, great story.

I knew of course. The question becomes one of trust. These two were obviously playing him from the start . So a second chapter dealing with this revelation would very much be in order . 4 stars

Wow, didn't expect that curveball. Nice story and a good read.

Well the story went on 'n on at a necessary slow pace to get to the punch line. You, possibly could have added a few extra quirky differences between the two Linda's and made him even more (sorta) frustrated while wanting a deeper relationship. But... 5*

VBR / 19pvc44

I can see now why she didn’t recognise him on their second meeting but it was still odd, with really only the difference of wine presence, holding hands or not, puzzles or not, and pubic hair style, but feel it would've been better if one was more sexually adventurous than the other to confuse his rate of progress more.

At the end, the concept of trust still has to be sorted. They used him. They may both have learned to love him, but they knew there was only one of him, but for him, he was fallen in love with a woman, but the person he loves doesn’t exist. Are they both teachers or in one of them "something in the city?" He has been duped, should he be pissed? Will he (should he?) try and fall in love with two different women? If he awoke their interest in lovemaking, would he be able to keep up?

Actually, there were more clues. One was OK being on top, the other preferred to be on the bottom. One liked clitoral stimulation, the other not so much. One had less of a gag response with BJs. One called out "Oh Ben" with climax, the other called out "Oh God."

I tend to think that since they shared "everything," they both planned on having him. They both said they loved him. Maybe a "throuple" is in the offing and he won't have to choose.

It was slow but very interesting for romance, and IMHO well written. The twins, I didn't see coming, I was thinking a child. I liked it and will read you other stories.

I enjoyed the story, but I had anticipated the ending by page two. However I had expected a bit more after the reveal.

It was pretty evident they were twins. It was a nice build up. However, if the story ends there it’s kinda wasted. Definitely needs to continue. He seems nice a nice guy and deserves happiness.

Quite well written, particularly in terms of grammatical and syntactical usage. The “I guess I just don’t understand women” shtick got old pretty fast, and the twin trope has been overdone, making it too obvious too early. I am glad that your protagonist was past buying into the adolescent “sex after third or fourth date” crap, which may be okay for college kids but not for mature adults. [I take that back— it’s not good for college kids either!]

Great story. I always wanted twins!

Yes, twins who share one man, lol! I can’t wait to get mine! No more “I’m on the rag so no sex” excuses! Perfect, I can eat one while other twin rides my cock then switch!

Now that I did not see coming. Wow identical twins, now the only complaint I have on this story is that it ended and didn't continue. The story could be quite interesting have both twins sharing him, one a wife and the other a mistress, maybe a polyamory relationship. Based on how long ago this was published I doubt the author will ever continue this tale.

At this point it gets my 5-star vote.

What!! You leave us hanging like that!! I’m not sure I can you 5stars…but I will cause you wrote such a great yarn!

OOOOOoooph!

It took FOREVER them to develop their heat...

So...Linda and Belinda are two sides of the same woman?

My gotcha response would be to keep the sexy one...

And give the other a nice goodbye kiss on her cheek!

Or...he can just thank his lucky stars...and keep both!

Did not see that coming. Does he continue with them or think, "I still don't understand women, maybe I should focus on Jessica"?

I got it on page 1. Waaay too easy. Cute story, though.

That was a surprise at the end, really didn’t expect that, maybe having both of them.

Great hook at the end, 8 was wondering what was her problem. I missed ,,, did he get both or just one?