All Comments on 'Underwear Ch. 07'

Thanks for the update. Story is amazing.

another truly amazing story i so oh u a anime pic of rayne lol the hours of enjoyment ive spent poring over your wonderful fiction i adore this im totally jealous of ur talent :)

romanticfae

I don't think I like this one so much. Rayne seems too... ordinary. If he falls in love, shouldn't it be with someone a bit cooler than Kev?

I don't know whether to be amused or worried by the comment below. I wasn't aware that coolness was a criterion for falling in love. If you're going to fight an emotion like love just because you think the person in question 'isn't cool enough' isn't that rather a sad and shallow approach to life?

Ok, I know Rayne is pretty shallow but even he's not THAT bad!

Rayne's confliction about his emotions is delicious. So much so I just scanned past the last sex scenes to see what Rayne and Kev would say next. That's when you know you've created psychological suspense! Please continue this story and if you don't mind add a little more physical description of Kevan. Thanks for a satisfying read!