All Comments on 'Undress to Impress'

I though this was a good story and hope it is not the last we have heard from those two

Thank you for sharing this with us! I hope that you will continue to write more chapters as I would love to see these characters develop more. This is a great start!

I like it. It’s fun reading it.

would like to read about both sets of girls 69ing next to each other and such things as them enjoying oral on the pool side

Very nice sexy story.

Glad to hear there will be more to this story. I really enjoyed it. Hopefully we don't have to wait very long.

A very enjoyable read. I’d like to read more about the girls adventures. I also look forward to any other stories you have to post. Much love and many thanks.

A well told story. Good pacing and description with a nice erotic edge. Nicely done.

Please keep going with your story. Thanks for sharing

I reallly liked this story. Unlike a previous commenter said, please don't involve the other two girls. Keep the two couples separate. They could have sex in the same room or outdoors, but this story seems better suited to continue as a loving, blossoming, young love between Alice and Laura rather than an all out lesbian orgy.

Very patience. Great Pacing. Nice happy, sexy plot. Loved the characters. <3

Looking forward to what Alice said when she said the others do whatever she tells them.

I really enjoyed your description of the girls. The fact that you gave them distinct and varied personalities was a breath of fresh air. Also enjoyed the lack of description about the protagonist, as no one really knows themselves. You only see it the way others treat you. Very well done.

Love the story, but you ought to get a 5* rating for the author name alone!

Nicely written. Love the flirting between the girls. Really looking forward to seeing where this goes

Really liked it; I was surprised , I kept waiting for the mean girl trick; liked this direction much more. If this is moved to a dom/sub type story it should come in the context of a relationship. There are enough choices with the being taken by the lesbian stranger domination theme.

I would love to see a follow up to this story... I appreciate how you built up the characters.

Excellent! Not normally my genre, but you just have a way with words. Thanks for the fun read!

Your story is really amazing! I appreciated the real attraction! That last text was amazing i’d love a part two :)

This was really good for your first story here! I enjoyed it quite a lot. I'm a sucker for cute and happy endings, so this worked out perfectly for me. I look forward to seeing more of your work!

I was expecting a darker turn to the story, I was relieved when it turned out well. Plenty of scope to extend into a series. I was impressed with the individuality given to each character.

More please.

Hey,

you did a good job there, hopefully we can have more stories maybe with the same characters.

Your story is very well written. I can really feel the emotions that Laura is going through. I’d love to hear more about this group.

Very well written and well planned for a girls first time! I hope you’ll take this further and let us see where you take them! Thank you!

I too was expecting nasty things to happen when the group invite an outsider and kept waiting for it all to kick off.

I'm glad it was a pleasant read and consisted of burgeoning love in youngsters.

This was a great read and I liked the build up in it. I like the direction the story went, being that you didn't rush the story. I could really feel the emotions of the character Laura with it being her first time and it was very sensual and erotic. I would love to see a part two to this story and the relationship of all 4 characters.

I thoroughly enjoyed it. I sense a possible love story brewing. Smiles and thanks.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story.

Considering how much Laura was distracted by the other girls' bodies, I can't help but think that Alice has opened Laura's eyes to her real sexual orientation.

I hope you continue this story.

A very fun, very sexy story. I would love to read a sequel, possibly with Lauren and Emily getting involved with each other, something you seem to have foreshadowed.

Outstanding. Love the title. More please!

Lol hate when I find excellent stand-alone stories because I always want more. Nonetheless great, great story!

Love it! Part 2?