All Comments on 'Undying Ch. 16-21'

Thoroughly enjoying the story, just love her character to bits and it's not at all predictable. Just hope that she doesn't go too far. Thanks for the long posts too :)

Thank You!

It’s always a good day when a submission from you appears. Fascinating new world.

This story changes so quickly it is hard to keep up but you do make it constantly exciting and a how can you not love the charm, wit and abilities of Syr. She has a way of making you cheer for her regardless of what she is doing. Spectacular chapter worthy of far more than only five stars.

J.D.