by annag98
I had to re-read Madame Recamier and the whole story is filled with Gallic charm. I don't know how far you intend to go with this, Anna, but I was wondering about some kind of back-story for Jill. Her early reticence before Anna worked her magic was that of a small-town, Bible Belt girl. Her character certainly didn't read like a sophisticate from New York or LA or similar. Whichever way you intend to go, here's five stars to speed you on your way.
As always, you write so well Anna!
I love this story so much. Jill is just such an incredible character :) and I can’t wait to see what happens in the club!
Nobody does it better, babe. Your stories are solid gold erotica with added spice. Just the best. xx
Fab story
Anna and Jill make such a hot couple. Jill seems to have fallen effortless into her new lifestyle.
Looking forward to the next instalment when the three new participants enter the group
Thank you Anna! Wonderfully written as always. Can't wait to see what's next for me....er I mean the character Jill...
Beautiful as ever Anna. Very sexy and I know a similar club Cant wait for next part.
beautiful, gorgeous, descriptive erotica. thank you for writing and sharing with the rest of us.
Surely you didn't expect less than 5 stars ;) Not sure I should be too open about how your writing affects me ;)
You know you’re an extremely talented writer. I hope you are open to small bit of criticism. It’s the overuse of ‘babe.’ It becomes a distraction, and takes away from the enjoyment of the story.
I see why your stories get such high marks, very well done. Love the characters and the feel they give; they are real, in beautiful situations, and you let us see, you truly understand and thrive in the Show, not Tell of storytelling. I know my publishers would love your work.
Kudos!!!
Not only is your work superlative; you also garner the most interesting set of comments. You have a large and devoted following, all richly deserved. It's unfathomable how anyone could rate this piece at less than 5 stars!