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by CassieQuinn

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Don’t stop now!

Seriously, very well done. Just the right flow and build.

5*

Tc

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Hot- keep going!

CassieQuinnCassieQuinnabout 1 year agoAuthor

Seems to be very polarising. Would like to know why?

muskyboymuskyboyabout 1 year ago

Too disjointed for me. It really needed a lot more dialogue as well.

AnnaValley11AnnaValley11about 1 year ago

Yes, it is a romance - hopefully we'll net to learn more about them in the not too distant future

LudvigBlomSELudvigBlomSEabout 1 year ago

I really loved the story but was quite reluctant to wote as to me it was not finished. I rarely wote on unfinished stories. A conclusion would be welcomed.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 1 year ago

Fun sliding up and down a pole!

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Written some books on Wattpad and wanted to try my hand on here too. Really want to improve so want any and all feedback please.