All Comments on 'Unexpected Benefits of Car Pooling Pt. 02'

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Royse69Royse69almost 3 years ago

again very well written.

nothing wrong with cliff hangers, even though the story is so good you want to go on.

You keep the story flowing nicely, he is taking more control or should I say letting her give him control. In real life control taken by abuse and manipulation usually turns around and bites you in the ass. Control given away freely by choice is true power, He allowed her to surrender. excellent

thank you

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With substantial experience of Master-slave relationship, I'm open for good discussions. Let me know, what you think after reading my story(ies).