All Comments on 'Unexpected Breakfast Blowjob'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

not incest

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Cool story but...

....how is this incest?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I fail to see where there was any incest in this lame story. Sorry to be critical, but it should be in a different catagory. It really didn’t have much depth.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Rick's sister

I think Rick's sister may have been a little slow. Not full on mentally handicapped, mind you, but a little slow. And Rick probably took advantage of her himself, frequently. Of course, there's no way our protagonist could have known that, and without that knowledge, who's gonna object to a big titted hot girl blowing them? Not me for sure.

LunarmagusLunarmagusover 3 years ago
I belive this is in the wrong category.

This seems like it belongs in Erotic Couplings, or Mature (if you want to stretch the idea of what Mature is). Not Incest.

grayge37grayge37over 3 years ago

Average story - nothing special. Ho Hum!

nanteennanteenover 3 years ago
No incest

Not incest. Boring.

paladin1954paladin1954over 3 years ago

I agree that there was no actual incest in this story. There is, however, the fact that Rick was his fraternity bro...

SomethingInTheWaySheMovesSomethingInTheWaySheMovesover 3 years ago
To Nanteen, re grading "boring".

You're boring.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 3 years ago

Erotic coupling story at best.

goldemeraldgoldemeraldover 3 years ago
Needs more pull

Feels like we have to force ourselves to keep reading to get to the good part - the sex. The buildup to the XXX shouldn't feel like a slog; it should compliment it.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 3 years ago

I read the story expecting some family fun as that's my favorite category. I thought he'd find Rick fucking his mom when he got back to the table or Anne and Mary to double team him. None of that happened, though. I agree with the other commenter on that this story belonged in Erotic Couplings.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please give up on writing erotica. This was horrible.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanalmost 2 years ago

I don't get it. 😕 Rick is okay with his sister blowing his friend that ONE TIME. But now she's suddenly off limits and it's not to ever happen again? What in the hell is up with that BS? Either you're good with it or you're not. 3/5

SiodisSiodisover 1 year ago

Remarkably average. Needs more substance and build up.

PhoenixLore1981PhoenixLore19817 months ago

It was a overall trashy story and in the wrong catagory this wasn't incest not even in the step category of incest

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