All Comments on 'Unexpected Ch. 17'

I'd love to hear Cory and Shanes story,maybe starting a few years from now when they are eighteen adding all the characters from UNEXPECTED to it so we know what they're up to.

I'm always excited to see a new chapter in this story. Keep up the good work, so many of us are excited to see where all the storylines are going - I love these characters!

I would love to read Jase and Callen's story. And were Alex's feelings for Callen ever addressed?

I can't wait for the next chapter but am so sorry Beth lost the baby she and Jack were so happy about it.

Good story. Not my usual thing but still good

I love this story! I am always eagerly waiting for the next installment. However, I am also waiting for the explanation that led Tracey to flee in the first place. In relationships, conflicts must be addressed. the conflict does not dissolve without some sort of acknowledement. please find it in the kindest of your heart to have Alex explain himself to Tracey.... I would be so ever grateful.

Rosemose

We are at 13 weeks since Ch 17 and Alex & Tracy's wedding is just 12 days away on the real calendar

Hoping everything is OK with you and that Ch 18 will arrive before too long - I've followed the story line since day 1 and would hate to have it left hanging open with no formal closure

Thanks for all your efforts to this point, I've really enjoyed the "unexpected' twists and turns everyone's lives have taken since last November - my cousin lives in Fort Myers for about 6 months each year (Nov-Apr) so I recognize some of the landmark names

GP

It is now Feb 2018 and still no Chapter 18 please finish this story it is one of my favourites and I have also followed it from the first day.

I love the writing on this series. I binge-read it all today. I hope the author continues it. The characters have all developed beautifully, and the dialogue is so real. Bravo.

Kudos to the author. Story is well constructed and compelling. Have binge read it in one sitting. A very unexpected surprise. (And it describes my fantasy scenario life story. And it comes at a time of my own life crises. I'm vicariously hoping for characters' successes. Man oh man.) Looking forward to the continuation.

I loved this story so much .

Read it a few times ,I just wish for another chapter .

I really enjoyed this story. Just hope there is another chapter. Will there be?

Loved these characters please write more about them .

Where's the end of this story!?!?

I feel cheated!

I committed my time to read the 17 chapters of a really good story but then it suddenly ends with no conclusion. Why would you do this to your readers?

I need the rest of this story .... been reading all day

Read comments on last chapter let’s you know if the story has been completed yet. Great story still waiting for the conclusion

I read this story twice, it's well written and you get drawn into the character's.

I hope the author reads the comment's but it's been a few year's since last chapter.

So can you please give us an ending please.

Tracy left for a full year and was still upset. Then he just joins back in with everyone with very little of what got him upset dealt with. That doesn’t make sense.