All Comments on 'Unexpected Company Pt. 03'

cause theres a lot of naughty play room.

I'm really enjoying this story line, and look forward to part 4 (and more?). Thank you for sharing this with us!

I beg you, you’re really building a great atmosphere and this is very well written! Please keep writing

Every chapter develops the characters more fully, keeping me in anticipation of the next chapter. I'm looking forward to finding out more about Mel's history. Is she a teenager, adult, or maybe hundreds of years old?

The dialog is fun, easy to follow, and sounds real.

I'm thoroughly enjoying everything: the story, characters, dialogue, writing.

I wish I could suggest additional storyline, but sadly I don't have the least bit of imagination. Luckily you do. :)

This is an intriguing story. I've enjoyed it so far and look forward to the next installment, whenever that may be.

Perhaps, in a future episode, they could try to find out who Mel really is and why she is stuck with the parameters around the house that she has. Also, why Gwen can hear and talk with her.

Thank you for your time.

I love this story, the dynamic between the two and their relationship. Thank you for writing it, I am looking forward to continue reading it whenever you find the time to continue.

Another great story. Please keep writing!

Oh please continue this! Please!!

Love this series! Patiently waiting for part 4 ...

This is just really fantastic. Excellent pacing, great character development, intriguing protagonists. I love both of these women and, as a hopeless romantic, hope they wind up together.

Heyo! I love this story and I've read it at least seven times in the past few months. I was hoping a part four would come out soon--so much so that I decided to comment on a story for the first time in eight years in the hopes that it would catch your attention and prompt you to continue this story. Thank you so much for posting what you've written so far, and I hope to read more from you soon.

This story will be continued, but I'm afraid I can't say when. Life circumstances have made it increasingly difficult to write. I'm extraordinarily flattered by everyone's kind words and enjoyment of the story, and I wish I could promise something more substantial than an 'eventually'. For now, all I can promise is that it's not dead.

Just wanted to add in my support for another installment of this. I reread it every so often, really enjoying the characters and whole set up.

So many stories on the site are wam bam.... but this has so much depth and deveopment of the characters. It could be a truely magnificent piece of work. Thanks for writing, and keep going!!

Can we have more of this please? Such an awesome story and I need more. I've been waiting ages.

I just found my new favorite writer. I hope you'll find the time to write some more!

Would like to see more of Gwen and Mel's story. Has been done SO WELL would like to see it completed.

Ok I've ( sofar read up to the 3rd lil story. I'd be a Lil freaked out at 1st,I personally would be 100% cool having a ghost ( sprit ) to hang out with & to talk to. Yeah the shower thing would totally freaked me out too. Love your stories. Plz keep getting, I'm " dieing "( pun intended) to know what happens next.

This has been a wonderful story so far! I know it's a bit of a long shot, considering it was last uploaded in 2019, but I'd love to see more!