All Comments on 'Unexpected Fantasy'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
and then what?

It was a hot idea, but the story was like buildup, buildup buildup, "and then we fucked her for a few hours" the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great story

Enjoyed the story but would have prefered he came inside her

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
more sex, less build

He's right. Where's the sex part????

Dont be lazy!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
suck me

im so fuckin hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Weak

The girlfriend isn't even given a name? Weak. Failure at storytelling.

dissparitydissparityover 2 years ago

Valerie was her name, and the story was a little short, but a damn fine start to a greedy girl scenario for future stories.

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