by zamore
It was a hot idea, but the story was like buildup, buildup buildup, "and then we fucked her for a few hours" the end.
im so fuckin hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The girlfriend isn't even given a name? Weak. Failure at storytelling.
Valerie was her name, and the story was a little short, but a damn fine start to a greedy girl scenario for future stories.