by KarrieMcIntyre
You bastard! Just kidding, wow can’t wait for parts two thru ten!!! This is a great setup for a great series
LOVED it? BUT... You made the ending a bit too brief. WHY was she at the window?
Ok, so you have our attention. Now let's see what you do to keep the story interesting and original. Too many
storylines go down the same path. Maybe some little surprises or teases. Thanks M
Change in perspective was a nice twist, can't wait for you to explore these characters... keep going.
Great start... surely daddy will turn on the porn again and then you can walk in and join him