All Comments on 'Unexpected Findings'

by KarrieMcIntyre

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cursrahcursrah5 months ago

more of this story please

symtronsymtron5 months ago

You bastard! Just kidding, wow can’t wait for parts two thru ten!!! This is a great setup for a great series

Soshameless11Soshameless115 months ago

A great start! Really looking forward to more.

EricaDoesNowEricaDoesNow5 months ago

LOVED it? BUT... You made the ending a bit too brief. WHY was she at the window?

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

great start , more please

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

More please

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Good start, need next chapter and a little longer word be great too

dodgeboy2dodgeboy25 months ago

Making me wish I had a daughter to jerk off thinking about her!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Please continue, can’t wait for Chapter 2

DaddyG69DaddyG695 months ago

I agree, please continue soon!!!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Ok, so you have our attention. Now let's see what you do to keep the story interesting and original. Too many

storylines go down the same path. Maybe some little surprises or teases. Thanks M

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

literally amazing.. keep it going....

CharletteCharlette5 months ago

Oh what a great ending.

Hell of a hook !

Such perverts, I love it.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Change in perspective was a nice twist, can't wait for you to explore these characters... keep going.

thedomoneflthedomonefl5 months ago

Great start... surely daddy will turn on the porn again and then you can walk in and join him

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Karrie McIntyre is the author of many short stories that tend to venture into the forbidden areas. She loves to explore the grey areas of life. She enjoys finding out what makes her characters really tick, and then doubling down on that! She spends most of her time working on ...

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