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by EastTexan69

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vcwriter17bvcwriter17bover 4 years ago
A good draft

A lot of unrealized potential here in terms of scene setting, character development and building intensity. Good but could be great.

goducks111goducks111almost 5 years ago
fun sexy story

i agree - too short - but otherwise, well done. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Only one mistake.

It wasn't long enough.

5stars

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I've been reading here for a while, thought I'd actually join and write something.

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