All Comments on 'Unexpected Item'

So glad to see another story from you

Sweet, but expectedly good;)

Or maybe I should say

Sweet, *and* :)

You have written something very, very special. This feel-good story about two people finding each other and as a result also finding themselves was beautifully done. Your characters seemed so real it was as though they actually existed. Their feelings and emotions about having first time gay sex, beginning a relationship and making it work was all totally believable. And with that hope that everything would work out, and that there would eventually have a HEA ending here was a grand finale to this wonderful ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ story. Thank you for writing and sharing this. Loved it.

I was so excited to see you shared something new! As I read the first word I knew it would be an amazing story and it is. An awakening, an exploration, heck, a sexploration. The tiny detail of Halley’s piercing rubbing Bede just right made me shudder in the best way possible. Just yesterday I recommended ’kinky af’ to another reader and then you appear. I’ll have to try to conjure you more often!

Hot and romantic asf.. love it. Thanks for sharing these two.

Would love to read more of their story!!!!!

This is absolutely phenomenal. The cutest thing I have ever read. Can't finde the words, I just loved it.

Oh my god PLEASE can we have more of these two????? 😍😍😍😍😍

Love the characterisation, the words, tis all great to me! Keep it up!