All Comments on 'Unexpected MFM 3-Some'

I like the way you built up to the action. You have a nice style.

Sort of a pure, condensed fuck tale. Nice.

If I read the story right, she was married and off with Travis for some secret loving?

No matter, like the other two commentators, I really enjoyed the story. I wondered, up to near the end, if she was going to stop, lock the door, tell Travis she would see him in the morning, and then spend the night doing her threesome. Of course, she would have no reason to be upset with Travis but - she was experiencing a whole new realm of sexual being and would not want to stop or interrupt it, just her and two studs, ecstasy!

Is there a chapter 2 coming?

Get and editor and learn how to write. I won't even rate it..it's not worth the click.

Memories of a tale that isn't too far removed from this. Hence the thank you.