All Comments on 'Unexpected Pool Boy'

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William smythWilliam smythover 10 years ago
Please!!!!

Don't leave us in suspense!

Even though I gave it a 5 this story is somewhat less than half finished.

You've made a good start, now keep going.

69plus169plus1over 10 years ago
Nice "job"

Nice, looking forward to more!

HarleyGuy228HarleyGuy228over 10 years ago

Great begining like to read more of these two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Please give us more this one was great, but should be a lot more, before the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nice short story

Many guys would like to help each other out. More should try, it is fun and beneficial to both.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Good start. You put the sounds 'in the room' and they are stil outside. What wil they do next

WittePietWittePietover 8 years ago
Good start

Looking forward to the next.

jonyoungaujonyoungau11 months ago

great story so far, my best memory was sucking on my friend's cock in his pool most afternoons one summer holidays. then when his older brother caught us I had two cocks to suck each day.

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