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"Hey, hey, hey, this is a happy time, what's with all the tears?" Rick asked, reaching out and awkwardly hugging me over the car console.
"Everything is just so overwhelming. I love you, Rick."
He squeezed me. "Love you too, Ang. Love you too."
***
Rick
(Several years later)
Ang and I stood side by side and waved at the bus. Joy, our little girl, waved back. It took her some convincing to get on the bus for her first day of kindergarten, but I knew that she'd love it. She already knew some of the kids who were going to be in her class.
When the bus turned the corner and was lost to view, Ang turned and looked up at me. "I can't believe it's been five years already."
I nodded and smiled. "I know. But I wouldn't want to change a thing."
She nodded and smiled up at me, before going up on her tiptoes and giving me a quick peck.
"Okay my Husband, off to work. If we want to be able to adopt a brother for Joy, we can't have the courts thinking that you skip working."
I laughed. "Gawd, but how I love you."
"I love you too, Rick." She stepped in, and hugged me, leaning her head on my chest.
I wrapped my arms around her, content to hold her there on the side of the street.
Looking up Ang said, "Thank you."
"For what?" I smiled.
"For keeping your promise. You promised me a happy family."
My heart soared at her words. "Thank you for being the loving wife I've always needed. Our situation may be an unusual one, but it works for us."
With another kiss, we separated, so I could go to work. I knew that my mother was right, if I wanted to be able to adopt another child, then the courts couldn't have any causes for concern.
The End.
****
I know this story is shorter, and I think flatter than the first part (though there is a lot more sex). I enjoyed writing this story, but as one person EZ8lt stated the first part was 5 pages of, not much. When I was writing this part, I was finding it difficult to find somewhere to actually take the story. I know that there could have been the long drawn-out court battles with the ex, or even having them have the kid, but I felt that a lot of that was just 'living life' not something that really needed to be depicted.
I'm not really happy with the way this ended, and I hope you all don't judge me too harshly because of it.
I do have some other story ideas floating around, however, I think I'm going to have a complete story before posting so that something like this doesn't happen again.
Though this part wasn't what I wanted it to be, I do hope you were able to enjoy it.
As always I would love to hear from you, either in the comments or in an email from my profile.
Padre
- COMMENTS
Anonymous4 months agoI give the story a 5.
I don't give out 5's handily. I enjoyed the primmest of the story where the son gets reacquainted with the mother. They fall in love with each other. And like most couples who truly love each other they will want to have a child together. Of all the incestuous genres the mother/son stories always seem to be a bit more erotic. And if it is couple with mom getting pregnant so much the hotter the story.
I was involved in an incestuous relationship with my older sister in 2004. It wasn't a one-night stand. We felt in love and became exclusive with one another. She wouldn't share me with any woman, and I wouldn't share her with any man. About our third year together Josie told me she wanted to make a baby. It's been twenty years that we have been together, and Josie gave me five beautiful children. I'm certain had I had a relationship with my mother I would have wanted to fuck my babies in her no questions about that.
Anonymous9 months agoYou had to wind this tale up somehow;so take credit for the thought you put into it. We're reading what YOU wrote, after all. I personally like happy endings.
Marvin20179 months agoTying up loose ends is never bad, and that is what you’ve accomplished here.
Maybe Steve & Pam would have worked as godparents, and following Julius get
raked thru the coals of the judicial system would have been satisfying.
But flat is for pancakes, and breakfast has already been served. You did good…
Mfkndragon10 months agoIt was a good series only thing I can think of that would have made it better in my opinion would have allowed them to have a kid together instead of adoption but it was a good series none the less
