All Comments on 'Unexpected Romance'

Nice build up to a perfect romance. Perfect Valentine's day story.

Nice!!

Very nice, one can dream about the perfect woman and I think she is in this story.

Totally great writing !!

not enough backstory for how they got to where they were when they first met, but ignoring that loved the slow burn/build up, thank you 4 stars

BUT it's not a Romance, it's a Mature story. It could BARELY be called an Erotic Coupling story. Nice fantasy, but he WAY too old for her. When she is at sexual prime and ready to rock and roll he will be ready to roll over and go to sleep PERIOD!

I disagree about him being to old for her. Sometimes when you find your match age doesn't matter. And this couple just seemed to click. They met at the right time and were perfect for each other. I think it's a sweet, hot romance with a nice slow build up. Good work!!!

This was a wonderful romance story but it happened a little too fast. It needed a few more days and a few more pages of add proper depth.

That being said I thoroughly enjoyed your story, I just wish there was more of it.

(4 stars)

Ignore the whining and just celebrate a very lovely May -December romance. I think you did a great job.

Well written and right up my alley, love these stories, hope you win.

This is the reason that I read Literotica is to find a story touches all of the senses like this did. I read it listening to Joe Cocker and "Leave your hat on".

Gave you a 5' cause 10' wasn't available.

Great sexy story! I’m in the midst of a similar love affair with a woman who I nuts about. A middle age hottie and the future love of my life! Bet womanly sex ever!

A nice May-December romance that as others have mentioned seemed far too rushed.

Great story. Thouraly enjoyed it. I can only wish it would happen for real as I am in a similar situation. My wife died of Leukemia a couple of years ago and I'm trying to move on as she told me to do. Hope to read more from you.

They seem so right together that I can believe this could last.

I imagine Simon with a bit of sexy dark chest hair and a treasure trail leading to his gorgeous cock. Hope they stay together! Happy Valentine's Day!

I have read many of your stories (so far). BUT this is one story of yours that I feel could REALLY have an additional chapter (or two). But even if it does not, thank you.

Fast forward 30 years and imagine it. Somehow that doesn't seem fair to her.

But well done...