All Comments on 'Unexpected Sex'

by Carnal_CowGirl

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visioneervisioneerover 7 years ago

His stamina would be the envy of Zeus, but otherwise you've shared a wicked little fantasy that lives up to your username.

Putting on my editor's hat, in a few places you mix verb tenses, and you should write "and" instead of "&." It's also helpful to readers to put dialogue into separate paragraphs. Otherwise, pretty good writing, Carnal_CowGirl. I hope you post more.

FoolishdancerFoolishdancerover 7 years ago
Loved this story

As a result of your story I began to understand the pleasure and the mystery of your enjoyment of rough sex and domination. I don't know that I've ever fully appreciated that dynamic quite so clearly before. And done concisely, not a bad trick. And hot.

More please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
So Sexy

The way you wrote this piece was erotic and had me rock hard. What a lucky man to enjoy a prize like you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thank you for the words that prompted my pussy to SOAK my panties ! I actually prefer sex with a GENTALman, but occasionally I feel the need for a rough fuck of my mouth, pussy and ass.

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