by Joanmcarthy
Best series I’ve read for a.while - easily!
I really like that the characters care about and for each other. Not just raw sex.
I love reading your work on here and scan daily to see if you have added any new material. You write to my taste and offer so much more. Thank you.
I would encourage you to continue to develop Ellen's (or the other girls') perspective.
I really liked the chapter from Ellen's viewpoint. It really helps understand Ellen, what she likes, what she wants and needs and how she feels about the other girls. Being a male it provides a chance to identify with a female that is exciting and rare. I am loving this story. Joanmcarthy you are doing a wonderful job managing these wonderful characters. Easily Hall of Fame material. But no more men, please.