by Joanmcarthy
I really liked the chapter from Ellen's viewpoint. It really helps understand Ellen, what she likes, what she wants and needs and how she feels about the other girls. Being a male it provides a chance to identify with a female that is exciting and rare. I am loving this story. Joanmcarthy you are doing a wonderful job managing these wonderful characters. Easily Hall of Fame material. But no more men, please.
I would encourage you to continue to develop Ellen's (or the other girls') perspective.
I love reading your work on here and scan daily to see if you have added any new material. You write to my taste and offer so much more. Thank you.
Best series I’ve read for a.while - easily!
I really like that the characters care about and for each other. Not just raw sex.