All Comments on 'Unexpected Threesome Ch. 25'

by Joanmcarthy

Sort by:

Newest First Oldest First

3 Comments

Anonymousover 5 years ago

Wonderful

Not sure how Ellen morphed into Emily, but golly what an entertaining tale! You write so very well.

KingCuddle over 5 years ago

No. Just no.

Once again, your try to write in a male voice is...nowhere close.

You already know I LOVE your female pov writing!

Your nuts and bolts here are okay...but unconvincing.

In this particular attempt, we're not even getting scenes...

explanations instead.

I gave it about 2/3rds of one page.

You are soooo much better a writer than this attempt.

Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

Wow, Emily is SOOOO sexy!!!!

Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ

Post as:

Anonymous

Joanmcarthy@Joanmcarthy

157 Stories

1240 Followers

I like writing about nice, even romantic, sex with nice people. In most cases my writing is inspired by people I have met and experiences I have had or watched others have. Sometimes the description of the person I include in my stories is almost recording a mental photograph...

Live Webcams 400 Online!