All Comments on 'Unexpected Threesome Ch. 25'

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Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

Wow, Emily is SOOOO sexy!!!!

KingCuddle over 5 years ago

No. Just no.

Once again, your try to write in a male voice is...nowhere close.

You already know I LOVE your female pov writing!

Your nuts and bolts here are okay...but unconvincing.

In this particular attempt, we're not even getting scenes...

explanations instead.

I gave it about 2/3rds of one page.

You are soooo much better a writer than this attempt.

Anonymousover 5 years ago

Wonderful

Not sure how Ellen morphed into Emily, but golly what an entertaining tale! You write so very well.

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